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I found some of the customization, but the issue is that it is the same color as the rest of the writing.  Maybe put the choices we can change and what we need to click to go to the next page  as a different color? Well a color that would be easy to read that is.

theres no customization yet so i suppose its planed, right?

There is customization in the first paragraph and throughout the chapter. Pronouns, hair, eyes, sexuality etc. It's dark red in the text so it can be hard to spot. Maybe make the text bigger?

No genders tho. Like not at all

I'm fine with that. Pronouns are really all that's necessary in regards to gender. Also setting it up would be awkward like "I look in the mirror to see a woman." Any ideas I had don't sound natural to what someone would actually say so I'll leave it unless I come up with something. I don't want to force anything just for the players sake, especially if its uncomfortable for me. For now, there will be no gender option. My ideas just sound way too off for it to be thing. 

Hello!

Chapter 1 is great, I loved it!

Now we have to wait to see how it continues...

Congratulations on this spectacular IF!:)

Thank you!

Wow this is great so far. I love the end of the world type stories. I take it Jesse isn't going to make it.

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Thank you! We'll find out 🤷‍♀️

Maybe it's just me but I can't scroll down. Even using the arrow keys doesn't work.

Fixed it!